Jackoginger's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[para hana]

Disregarding the graphics, pointless

There wasnt much to this. No story, no speech just a girl opening her mouth. I'll admit, I though the graphics were ok, but why didnt you use your skills to make it longer and make something better. No wonder this didnt get far. Keep animating but make them more interesting. 2/10.

[ZOOS]

Colourful, cute and enjoyable

I really liked the graphics that was used in this. It was very colourful and the best i've seen in a while. I was also quite funny. Though, for the next one, try and make sure the sound effects are all ok as they made a loud crackling sound (and no, lol, it wasnt my speakers). This might be something to work on. Cant wait for the follow up! 9/10.

[If you seek...]

Great stuff

Great animating skills here, I see a daily first for this. I think I understood its message. I really liked the graphics, it looks like this was worked hard on. 9/10. Keep it up! 9/10.

[Fear Cologne]

"It'll probably be illegal soon"

This was quite funny. Though the graphics could of been improved but apart from that this was good on the whole. 8/10.

TylerLandis responds:

Thanks! I'm still trying to improve my drawing skills... haha

[Daydreams.]

Really liked it!

This was a really good idea for an animation and it was really funny aswell! 9/10.

[Thrasher - Part 1]

Not that great

Quite a few things need to be improved on, one of which is that a few things, like the rain (I think another reviewer pointed out) wasnt very smooth, so that could be a thing to work on (obviously not the rain but the smoothness of the animation). Another would be to make it longer, because it didnt really explain much about the story, apart from the speaking at the part. I also got confused on who was who. Finally, improving the graphics when somebody gets shot should be another main priority if the animation is going to have alot of violence, as poor blood graphics will make this lose a chance of getting a good score.

Hopefully by the time the second is out, these improvements would of been accomplished. Keep at it. 3/10.

[Let Leek In]

Its OK

This is probably an inside joke, though, I got most of it. Quite funny and had no idea he was going to shoot the crap out of him! Anyway, cool animating. 7/10.

[Magical Butterfly]

It was quite pleasant

It was quite a nice flash animation, the lip sync of the fairy could of been improved, but apart from that, it was good. 7/10.

[Chocolate Cake]

Its a start, an interesting one

You have added sound, though, improving your animation skills and graphics should be your next step. For example, when he walked, he would walk one step back, probably to do with how you done it on the timeline. The graphics werent that great, though, practice will make it better over time. Another should be shaping the cake so its not as big as two heads put together, how the guy in the animation eat that I have no idea, I'll give him that. Sound and speech should match the animation, so, more dramatic, as the speech was a bit unclear in some parts.

It wasnt that good but it had an interesting and 'cute' plot, as Lazarou put it. 2/10.

andy70707 responds:

umm, that pretty much summs it up. Some parts I really CBA to animate, like them eating. I didnt really think about the size of stuff, but its not the worst thing.

[WMR short: Brians B-day]

Haha not bad

A bit strange, but I guess thats what you was aiming for here. Also nice graphics, couldnt see any flaws in that. 7/10.