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[>stick fight<]

For your first time animating...

It's a decent flowing Xiao Xiao styled flash. It's got it's faults, but with it being your first animation and it being a real decent start, i'm sure you could make your next attempt much better. Give your next one a nice little intro or something that can give your flash a story. Spend longer on perking up your drawing skills and you'll have a stick figure movie that'll definitley get a good score. Add a little fight music too, that will make it look much more presentable. Not a bad start!

4/10

filip4e25 responds:

thanks a lot. ill take your advice and i hope mi second flash will be better :) thanks

[Everybody Loves Megaman]

Not bad - quite short

I suppose this was what you was aiming for. The concept of it was ok. All in all, not a bad effort.

6/10.

Flaxington responds:

I always forget a few things when i submit my flashes... -.-;; it's quite annoying :/ Thanks though.

[knight vs coka cola]

Not really funny, graphics weren't 'bad'

Like other animated shorts I've reviewed today, people are determined not to take time with something that could actually turn out decent. I mean, you got the animating thing ok (we're not talking Adam Phillips animating but for what it is). just needs to be a bit more funnier (if that's what you're aiming for), and perhaps something the people watching can actually say 'wow, not bad, I liked that'.

3/10.

sasar responds:

thanks, i now it was kind of sucks script... but i will try to improve it in next time:)

[Large Hadron News]

It was ok

The graphics were good but it wasnt really that funny, but that only appeals if its meant to be funny. I liked how Simon Pegg was a reporter, that was quite funny. Dont you think your a bit late for something on the Hadron Collider? That was ages ago when that was the big story. Anyway, good work. 7/10.

jiggitysmith responds:

Yeah. I actually had this made back when it was big news but I never finished it. Did you notice Simon Pegg had red on him?

[DoubleWide - Episode 2]

Its quite a funny series

Some of the Jokes are good, but some of them are quite repetitive. I like the graphics, and like how it is put together. As another reviewer said, it is like watching a series on the TV, though, for the next one, think about the lines and how they can become even more funnier. Since your last one, its been 3 years. Did it take you that long to make an episode? Please reply if you can. Good work on this, hope another will be released sooner then the last was. 8/10.

hoim responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely keep your comments in mind. :) It didn't take us 3 years to do this one... we just got lazy and stopped for a while :) We'll start knockin' new ones out on a regular basis now.

[Fear Cologne]

"It'll probably be illegal soon"

This was quite funny. Though the graphics could of been improved but apart from that this was good on the whole. 8/10.

TylerLandis responds:

Thanks! I'm still trying to improve my drawing skills... haha

[Chocolate Cake]

Its a start, an interesting one

You have added sound, though, improving your animation skills and graphics should be your next step. For example, when he walked, he would walk one step back, probably to do with how you done it on the timeline. The graphics werent that great, though, practice will make it better over time. Another should be shaping the cake so its not as big as two heads put together, how the guy in the animation eat that I have no idea, I'll give him that. Sound and speech should match the animation, so, more dramatic, as the speech was a bit unclear in some parts.

It wasnt that good but it had an interesting and 'cute' plot, as Lazarou put it. 2/10.

andy70707 responds:

umm, that pretty much summs it up. Some parts I really CBA to animate, like them eating. I didnt really think about the size of stuff, but its not the worst thing.

[Metal Gear Stompin']

Not bad

It wasnt bad though the only problem is that it was too short. Next time, make it longer. It will become more popular as a result. 6/10.

MarcusRaven responds:

It was actually the maximum time allowed by the collab. I may do one that's longer later on.

[Max's Big Adventure]

Sorry, I dont think you'll get front page for this

And the reason for that is that the plotline didnt match the title, the animation was random and didnt follow to anything, and absolutely no point to this. Spend more time on your animations, because this wont go far. 0/10.

MegaPwnage09 responds:

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[Earth Hour]

A good funny animation

This was funny stuff, and the point couldnt of been made clearer. The graphics and style was good aswell. And good call on the subtitles, as the speech was sometimes unclear. Well done on this! 9/10.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

;).