Jackoginger's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[>stick fight<]

For your first time animating...

It's a decent flowing Xiao Xiao styled flash. It's got it's faults, but with it being your first animation and it being a real decent start, i'm sure you could make your next attempt much better. Give your next one a nice little intro or something that can give your flash a story. Spend longer on perking up your drawing skills and you'll have a stick figure movie that'll definitley get a good score. Add a little fight music too, that will make it look much more presentable. Not a bad start!

4/10

filip4e25 responds:

thanks a lot. ill take your advice and i hope mi second flash will be better :) thanks

[One Wish Upon a Star]

Nice animating and nice jokes

The ending was great, had a good story and was very funny. I can't really fault the animating. I think if more effort went into perking up the graphical content of the cartoon, the writing or idea wouldn't be as good. Overall, great work.

9/10.

[Everybody Loves Megaman]

Not bad - quite short

I suppose this was what you was aiming for. The concept of it was ok. All in all, not a bad effort.

6/10.

Flaxington responds:

I always forget a few things when i submit my flashes... -.-;; it's quite annoying :/ Thanks though.

[Rainbow Layers Collab]

For what it is, it's quite good

The animation flowed well and the drawings were quite good. A decent collab overall.

6/10.

[Papervision3D Experiment]

At least the cube moves...

I'd suggest that you go back and fix the button problem. It's like a driving game but the accelerate button doesn't work. I'm sure in time you can make something worth while.

1/10.

[Morning Fishing]

Pretty decent animated short

Again, your animating is really good and it flows really well. It's simple and it's drawn well. Can't really fault you for that. I let out a little chuckle at the ending.

7/10.

[short random animation]

Yep, you summed it up, no sense at all

I can't really justify myself saying it had more than one point of than that the drawing wasn't horrifically bad, but I guess your main theme was 'pointless', so a point goes to you for that, so that this animation's review isn't exactly pointless.

[knight vs coka cola]

Not really funny, graphics weren't 'bad'

Like other animated shorts I've reviewed today, people are determined not to take time with something that could actually turn out decent. I mean, you got the animating thing ok (we're not talking Adam Phillips animating but for what it is). just needs to be a bit more funnier (if that's what you're aiming for), and perhaps something the people watching can actually say 'wow, not bad, I liked that'.

3/10.

sasar responds:

thanks, i now it was kind of sucks script... but i will try to improve it in next time:)

[Master And Commander]

Not good really, kinda boring, BUT

It's your first animation! Try some different things out and spend a little more time thinking of ways to create something half decent that might reward you in the long run (a nice and enjoyable animation). I can't give you a point for storytelling but I can give you 2 for trying stuff out. There are much worse first time animations.