Jackoginger's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[cube field]

How can this achieve a better score?

It had no point, no sound or any animation (really) involved. It wasnt a cartoon, it was just cubes appearing on the screen, one after the other.

A good start would be making it more enjoyable to watch because no one would really find this entertaining. Adding colours, things that move etc etc...

There could of been music, too. Not good by any means but you should think about submitting something that people want to watch on NG. 0/10.

RedPlatinum responds:

of course it had no point... that is why i made it just to see that if it was even possible to make something like this without scripting and well even though it may be boring it is one of those things you just keep watching, to see where it goes

and thanks for your advice it has been taken into consideration, adding more color more things happening on screen, and most definatlty music

[.Ink.]

A good simple animated piece

It was quite entertaining watching it. It was like you smoked something strange and you walked were watching your imagination run wild. The animation was smooth and very amusing to watch. 6/10, keep it up.

slanted2 responds:

despite the unnecessary reference to drugs, thank you, "a good simple animated piece" is about what i was going for.

[AT&T]

How this got past the judgement is beyond me

Trying to make a positive review, is quite difficult. There was no sound, It was short and probably meant nothing to its NG audience. Not very enjoyable to watch either. It was a few bars that moved around and changed colours, not exactly great animating. Why not try something that has a better point, or a plot. It looks like you have the basics of flash, why not use it better? 1/10.

IJP290 responds:

It's commercial length. And this is what some commercials ARE. I didn't add sound because I never had the time or the will to go looking for SFX, or to record voice. I plan on adding them eventually

This I consider to be practice. If you don't like my practicing, then don't review. Practice makes perfect, not the other way around.

[Mario Kart DeStruction]

LOL really liked this!

I love the mario kart games, and as for the ending, anyone who has played it would know that getting hit by one of those things right at the finish line is VERY ANNOYING. Though, satisfying if you are the one who throws them. And I HATE rainbow road!!! 8/10. Very funny.

Lythero responds:

Hah, we always use rainbow road for the last race since it's really hinders anyone who might snake boost their kart, since there's so many twisty turns and loop de loops.

Thanks!

[.Alice.]

The story was ok but the graphics needed tuning up

I didnt like the graphics that much, but that can be improved. The story was not bad but the animating wasnt really that great. Not as good as i thought it would be, but keep the animating. Perhaps halloween animating doesnt suit you. Try different stories and perhaps the animation would fit. 5/10.

M1K3-B responds:

Thank you for the review. I'll continue to improve on the graphics. I was going for creep/scary. Thats what I think of when Halloween comes around. So thats what I chose to do. If you didnt find it creepy or scary, thats okay. I'll try to improve in the future.

[A Desultory Halloween]

Quite wierd but not bad

A very strange way to animate this upcoming halloween, but it wasnt bad when it came to animation. 7/10.

BlazingGamer responds:

Strange indeed.